A poem written for a Literature Assignment on the American Dream over different periods. The tricky part was incorporating 10 different types of literary devices into the poem .
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Wow you are truly a brilliant student! I am in love with your writing!!!!
- Mrs M
Chasing Daisies
-Hari Srinivasan
A Dream of America - Canada to Mexico
Atlantic to Pacific - coast to coast
Star Spangled Banner at the end of a pole
Lady Liberty, promises so much more
Indian tribes, Proud and free,
Living their American Dream
Spirits in the wind, prairies, trees
Paleface equaled crossroads
Puritans rode the waves on big boats
Mayflower Compact of 1620
Land gained - the Pilgrim Dream
New beginnings – piety, courage, industry
Jonathan Edwards thundered on
A wrathful God is at your heel
Fire and brimstone surround you,
American dream could end in hell.
Shake off the colonial yoke
Common Sense dictates that
Self-evident Truths – America’s Dream
Freedom, I demand thee
A nation born of founding fathers
blacksmith to mathematician
Courage, entrepreneurship, a vision
America is the land of endless opportunity
Freedom seems color white
Freedom is White as Bondage is Black
Dream should be color-blind
Locke’s law guarantees that
Bannekar writes to Jefferson
Slave ships cargo, Middle Passage
Dark Skin is mere traded commodity
Death preferred to chained slavery
The Torch Lady blindfolds her eyes
Whence the American Dream
AnnĂ©es folles at Great War’s end
Economic prosperity and disconnect
Flappers strangers at Gatsby’s Party
Common Sense turns NonSense
Liberty now green, the Lady oxidized
American Dream - a wanton triviality
Chasing Daisies -“a single green light”
Daisy a Weed, a parasite
19th amendment, bootlegger dream
Speakeasy of the “Valley of Ashes”
Lost Generation tries to make sense.
Tango to tainted technicality
The torch glows the American Dream?
A house in the suburbs, a white picket fence
Money in the bank, life is sure easy
What promises did the Lady guarantee?
Bottomless material impossibilities?
Energy filled with forced cheer.
Foreclosure filled news reports.
Jobless, can’t pay bills.
Sorrowful nights of holiday dreams.
Cheerful shopping. Media driven stock.
Rising predictions. Homeless and Occupy.
Congress self serving re-election dreams.
Food pantries serving all time highs.
Greed driven marketing, black friday spending, cyber monday cheating.
Gift of the season buried by market competition.
Materialism, the new education taught
A Chase. A race. No start No end
Everyone has a different mind
Unfulfilled fantasy undefined
Myriad confusion – sole to soul
So what really is the American dream?
Peace, contentment - my dream
Cross medical hurdles and take the world with me
Lady whispers, realize your dream
Strip off the oxidized green
Rise above human trivialities
Make a difference. Travel possibilities
Another American Dream or Future Reality?
- Hari Srinivasan 12/9/11